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"Everything has secrets" said a hush little voice inside my head
The voice was soft and felt like a whisper in my ear, but at the same time it felt like an echo from a distance. No, it felt more like it was inside my head, reading my every thought searching through my every memory as if looking for something. What could it possibly be looking for though? I have nothing to hide, and nothing of value, so just what is so important about me thats worth getting inside my head for?
Then I came to the realization that I was in a small room. There weren't any doors or windows, nor was the room lit. Yet it was very strange because I could still see, my vision is dim, but I could at least see up to the corners of the room. The room was quite cold and made entirely out of stone, it reminded me of an old prison cell. I starting shivering from the chilly air.
The vision changes, now I am standing all alone on an empty vast plain. Well at first its empty, then like a picture snapping, that same empty plain has turned into a battlefield.  The acrid stench of death is overpowering and the battle rages on all around me, its almost like I am invisible, like no one can see me, yet at the same time it feels as if people are calling out to me. At first I cant make out the words, but then they become clear, and all I can hear is what sounds like a living nightmare.
"Help me" Is all I can hear from all the creatures and people dying around me.
Then something strange happens, I open my eyes and there I am sitting in my bedroom, on a peaceful summer night. I can hear some crickets in the close distance, and a soft breeze blows through my open window.
"Just another nightmare" I say sighing to myself
          My name is Kitty, and I have been having this recurring nightmare ever since I can remember. Its a curse that I have been burdened with for I am a child, born to serve both darkness and light and I was created to restore balance in the universe. I was never directly told this, but I feel as if it is my destiny. Its just something that I can feel deep down within, and this feeling of destiny has bothered me my whole life, but I haven't ever told anyone for fear of their reaction. This is me and this is my how I must live my life. I have to live a secret.....a secret I can never tell anyone about.
                 
So I decided to rewrite the book about my ocs story :D
I might write ch1 if people like it :)
Hehe well tell mwa what you think of my writing okay? Im looking to futher improve
*this might have a few spelling errors and mistakes(I tried to fix them, but im not the best editor)
Kitty looks like this- [link]
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:iconjochannon:
Are you looking for an editor?
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Catnipkitty99 Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
would you be willing to do that? :)
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:iconjochannon:
Well, I'm a professional editor; I don't know that you could afford my price, but I do like to go out and just do some editing for fun.
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Catnipkitty99 Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh wow thank you, that would mean so much to me if you would do that! :love:
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AzusaNanako Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool!
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Catnipkitty99 Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thNk you ^.^
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AzusaNanako Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's very pretty and well written!
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Mossfiresmoon Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow your writing is so wonderful! Not only are you an awesome artist, but I think that you are also a pretty good writer :D
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Catnipkitty99 Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you...oh what words of kindness :blush:
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